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Old 10-06-2008, 11:22 PM
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MC story part 1

Hhmmmmm since Zorid asked his randomly (i just said i writ a story lol) , ask me to post a story i writ anyways it 1,010 words i think, so if u want to u can read it. And they will most likely be gamer mistakes and maby a few spelling mistakes but. If u want to read it. (it's the massive text below this )
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A Tran’s helicopter passes over the head of recon one.
Recon one: We found the nod base but we've been ambushed by an army of 100,000 bots send help!!!!!
---------Transmission lost------------
Loc: send our troops
The 100,000 GDI Soldier arrived near the base alive and find recon 1's dead bodies.
Just as the lead officer looks up a laser rifle is in his face and his entire platoons are dead.
The gdi Officer closes his eyes waiting for the shot to end his last breath, but it never comes, he look up and see's the
Stealth black hand dead beside him.
He stands up and looks around him and he sees 9 Soldier killing every Stealth Black Hand before it even moves, he was so
Surprised at how they could kill them so fast. One of the men Run to the Officer picks him up by the shirt and chucks him to
His feet "get the fuck in one of the apc's!" Yelled Zorid. The officer gets a little bit creped out by the cyborg and mutant
he passes. "Sir, hurry up and get back" yelled SAS, Zorid climbs into one of the Apc's and the rest of the MC's get in the
Other APC's and drives of to the south, retreating back Into GDI territory.
-------------Into over------------

3 gdi Apc enter the gdi base, and 10 people leaves the apc's, "Officer go to you're quarters" said Zorid
"yes, sir and thanks" said the officer salutes and leaves. The MC's walk into general Loc office "you wanted to see us, sir"
said Zorid.
"Yes I did, u did excellent saving that officer’s life, but that's not why i called you here, recent Intel shows the bots are building
an army it almost meet a critical mass of 1,000,000 Bots, General Loc take a pause, not many people here can fight bots 1 on
1, But u manage to fight bots on a massive scale, 100 to 1 and get back with hardly a scratch on you, but I have a job for
you.... An explosion cuts of general loc Order. Battle runs outside the office," What the hell just happened!" Asked Loc
"The bots have found us and are launching a full scale attack scans report there's an army of 600,000 at the enterers to the
base, how can we survive this?" said the Technician in terror
"Well we are here, and we will take em" said Zorid with the rest of MC agreeing
“U can’t defeat an army of 600,000 bots!" said Loc
“We can try, and keep them busy while you try evacuate the base" Said Smee
Battle comes running back though the door, "sir there a lot of bots! Snipers have men pined down already" yelled Battle. Just
as he finished a bullet comes and hits him in the leg, "ow that hurt! , but sir get you're men to a transport
Helicopter and leave quickly before the Bots destroy the AGT. The 9 members of MC watch the last transport helicopter leave. Just as they start to leave battle find the bullets and pulls it out his leg, and bandages up his leg.
"Ok the bot will be pouring in soon, SAS climb up on the ridge and place Remotes up there, it might hold them off for a few
minutes, Battle mount up with a Gatling gun on the top of the ridge, and when we tell you to move, get the fuck of the ridge,
Charlie get in the last Apache they left behind and try gives us some sir cover, the rest of you form a defensive perimeter as
you see fit" said Zorid. The MC clan is ready for the fight as they hear the bots heavy tanks start to roll in, “battle! Arm
the Gatling gun and shot everything that moves, Charlie try kill the snipers, Smee is the rockets turrets up? said zorid
"Yes everyone is ready" answers smee. Then they hear battle fire into the groups of bots, charging at him "I'm almost
dry!!!" yelled battle as the Gatling gun stop firing. Battle takes out his .100 cal and starts shooting multiple bots before they
get close to him, battle pulls 2 grenades and chucks them into the middle of the bots,” I’m out of ammo......." said battle. As
Battle gets up to climb down the ridge he gets shot 4 times in both arms, and falls off the ridge into a Nod light tank. SAS
detonate the c4 now" yelled zorid a massive explosion happens taking out the entire ridge making it all fall onto the bots
and just missing the light battle was in, "hopefully that will keep them busy" said Wolf, just as wolf said that a another
explosion happens knock a piece of derby into the back of wolf knocking him out cold, a massive piece of burning tiberium
fly’s onto SAS foot and melts it to the ground. Charlie Apache fly by and see about 4 members of Mc already down, He look
Forwards and his Hud telling him there 40 apache incoming Charlie shots all 35 hellfire missiles taking out 25
Apaches, but one of the missies hit the bot apaches sending it spiraling into the back router of Charlie apache destroying the
Blade and bring it straight into the ground, just before it hits the ground Charlie jumps up onto a ledge and snipers shots him
In each leg, keeping him there as 100 bots comes up to capture him. The bots march in the base Furoiux, Tnaismith, Smeebrv, Zorid, Comkees, SASbladeAK-47 open
fire onto the bots, the bots keep rushing in despites all the heavy casualties of them, all of the remaining MC runs out of ammo. The bots
fires sleep gas into the area but Zoird is protected by a Gas mask, a bot walks up to him and try’s to kick him in the face
Zorid grabs it leg and breaks it, and grabs it auto rifle and starts killing ever bots that he can until the gun runs out of ammo, the bots shot him with
enough tranquiller to bring down an elephant. They look away to tie the others up and order an EMP strike on SAS, they look back and he is gone........

---------------------------------------------Tranismon interuproted---------------------------------------------------
to be contuined

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Old 10-07-2008, 07:32 PM
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great first part of your novel i cant wait to read the rest i can see many books in the future maybe [MC] has a budding jk rowling im on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment

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Old 10-07-2008, 09:38 PM
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nice story battle looking forward to the next bit
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Old 10-08-2008, 01:50 AM
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ya good story battle, but did i have to get knocked out so eairly? XD nah jk

cant wait for next part
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Old 10-10-2008, 04:53 AM
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Oh my goodness. This phenomenal! It is spectacular, fabulous, and simply insane!! It is fantastic! Its like....so real for those of us in [MC], and you wrote about what happens in Co-op and made it into a story and was so....realistic!

Man, I can't wait until you write the next part! Take your time ok? Good writing only comes with time, and when you feel like it. Don't ever rush stories like this, otherwise it won't feel sincere and good. It will feel rushed and empty if you just try to do it fast.

Write when you have the inspiration.

I simply think it is fantastic Battle. I think this could indeed become an official series like J.K Rowling's books!

Can't wait 'till the next one!! :grind ance:

Well done!

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Old 10-12-2008, 05:43 AM
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lol, of course u can tnais, i don't mind hmmmmm, what else to say, hmmmm i haven't totally finshed part 2 part it neraly done i think lol, looks like some of u guys wants me to keep writeing em, i have plenty of idea's still and if u guys even chip in idea i will try to add em in the story if u wish or u can add more onto the storys i post here, or completely change it.

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Old 10-12-2008, 10:34 AM
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(Optional Part. Your writing inspired me to just make something up on the spot. This is just for fun, the one you post will be the official continuation.)

Back at a Secondary GDI Headquarters Base, the Platoon-Commander of all Ground-Forces attached to the [MC] Clan Support Division recieved reports of hotspots all around the main base where Lock and [MC] had been located last.

Platoon-Commander: Intel! I want full intel and overhead sat-images of the sector! Bring up onto Auxilery One VC-Display!

The GDI soldiers at the computer terminals nod and immediately dial in the codes and buttons to bring up a picture of the devastation NOD was raining down on [MC] and the GDI Forces.

The Platoon-Commander [or P-Comm for short], frowned and shook his head at the red dots still heading towards [MC] Clan and it's high-class soldiers. He waved his Sergeant Officer over and pointed to the screen.

P-Comm: Sergeant! [MC] Clan and Locke, along with nearly all of GDI's Main Base Forces are taking heavy casualties and loss of defenses here. We're not going to let our GDI comrades down. Rally Support-Craft One through Seven. Aircraft Transports Eighty-oh-Nine and Delta-Seven dispatch at once to the target zone. Light Orca escort will clear the way for an initial landing.

The Platoon-Commander took the GDI Sergeant Officer by the collar and pulled him even closer.

P-Comm: We can't fail Sergeant. [MC] and Locke cannot be lost to those NOD scumbags. Blast your way in, and assist [MC] in whatever way possible to attain safety. Ten minutes after your ETA, we'll send in additional firepower in the form of vehicle support and light air cover, but we can't do it until the initial landing zone is clear.

The P-Comm paused again.

P-Comm: .....Don't give up Sergeant. We're going to break through, and save our team.
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Nice story
I moved it to a public section on request of your fearless leader
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I just had to read this ^^

Good work Battle!
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Wow this brings back memories of DOA. Back when i wanted to get to use Flash MX. I wanted to use it to to create a entertaining action packed story called "The History of DOA". Anyways. Very nais battle
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